Transformation,Rotation & reflection

writing- Abandoned places

Abandoned places 


Our learning goals are to:
-write a description, using powerful words and phrases
-include some Te Reo Māori
-carefully check that our sentences make sense and have correct punctuation and spelling.


The Abandoned hospital
It was a sunny day in the forest. I was running and I wasn’t looking where I was going. Suddenly I tripped over a big grey stone. I looked up. I was a bit hurt after my fall. Standing before me was a tall brick wall. There was Moss  growing out of it. I had a feeling that something amazing was on the other side of it.

 After an hour or two I reached the top of the wall with bleeding knees and scraped hands. I sat on the top of the wall and looked down. I was hawa /trembling. While I was looking at the ground I Turned  Around And there was a huge Hospital.  It looked  burnt  and  as if it have Moss all over it. Then  there was a damp smell  in the air.  I looked up at the abandoned hospital. It looked whakamataku / SCARY but I still wanted To investigate.

 I put my hands on both sides of the hospital, it creaked and cracked. And then I kicked the door open. I was pakaru/scared.  I walked in. There were Hospital Beds everywhere. It looked like whakmaku / SCARY . It had a dirty smell like blood. Suddenly a   ghost Nurse appeared. I ran away.  She followed me. And then I jumped of the brick wall……..