Monday, 29 July 2019
Friday, 26 July 2019
writing- Abandoned places
Abandoned places
Our learning goals are to:
-write a description, using powerful words and phrases
-include some Te Reo Māori
-carefully check that our sentences make sense and have correct punctuation and spelling.

The Abandoned hospital
It was a sunny day in the forest. I was running and I wasn’t looking where I was going. Suddenly I tripped over a big grey stone. I looked up. I was a bit hurt after my fall. Standing before me was a tall brick wall. There was Moss growing out of it. I had a feeling that something amazing was on the other side of it.
I put my hands on both sides of the hospital, it creaked and cracked. And then I kicked the door open. I was pakaru/scared. I walked in. There were Hospital Beds everywhere. It looked like whakmaku / SCARY . It had a dirty smell like blood. Suddenly a ghost Nurse appeared. I ran away. She followed me. And then I jumped of the brick wall……..
Our learning goals are to:
-write a description, using powerful words and phrases
-include some Te Reo Māori
-carefully check that our sentences make sense and have correct punctuation and spelling.
The Abandoned hospital
It was a sunny day in the forest. I was running and I wasn’t looking where I was going. Suddenly I tripped over a big grey stone. I looked up. I was a bit hurt after my fall. Standing before me was a tall brick wall. There was Moss growing out of it. I had a feeling that something amazing was on the other side of it.
After an hour or two I reached the top of the wall with bleeding knees and scraped hands. I sat on the top of the wall and looked down. I was hawa /trembling. While I was looking at the ground I Turned Around And there was a huge Hospital. It looked burnt and as if it have Moss all over it. Then there was a damp smell in the air. I looked up at the abandoned hospital. It looked whakamataku / SCARY but I still wanted To investigate.
I put my hands on both sides of the hospital, it creaked and cracked. And then I kicked the door open. I was pakaru/scared. I walked in. There were Hospital Beds everywhere. It looked like whakmaku / SCARY . It had a dirty smell like blood. Suddenly a ghost Nurse appeared. I ran away. She followed me. And then I jumped of the brick wall……..
Wednesday, 26 June 2019
MY Scratch Project- Te Reo
Task:Create a simple animation using scratch that teaches people some of our phrases of the week - Korero o te Wiki.
W.A.L.T
- use scratch to code for computational thinking.
-learn how to create basic code on scratch.
-say basic phrases in Te Māori.
Click here to see are phrases of the week - Korero o te Wiki.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1soDr946oBzf0tqOLumhhaizJ5VQemVC_Li8PvBwKHI/edit
See my scratch project below
Tuesday, 21 May 2019
My Marae Recount
THE NOHO MARAE
On the 1 / 2 of May, term two 2019, Room seven, Room five , teachers
and some parents went on the noho marae for camp. We went to the marae
overnight to learn about our local marae.
and some parents went on the noho marae for camp. We went to the marae
overnight to learn about our local marae.
Looking in the marae
Wow the inside is amazing! The Carvings and the Pounamu are
awesome I said to Tanya (my mum). Some time later Jerry came in and
he introduced himself. Jerry said that we can go and look at the
carvings. He said that I will tell you some stories later of the carvings.
Then everyone did there mihi. After Jerry said we could go to the kai room
and have some morning tea. “The kai kai was delicious,” I said to Billie. . After
that we got 10 minutes of play. Me and my friends played tag. I got targeted
and I got a little upset. But It was fun.
awesome I said to Tanya (my mum). Some time later Jerry came in and
he introduced himself. Jerry said that we can go and look at the
carvings. He said that I will tell you some stories later of the carvings.
Then everyone did there mihi. After Jerry said we could go to the kai room
and have some morning tea. “The kai kai was delicious,” I said to Billie. . After
that we got 10 minutes of play. Me and my friends played tag. I got targeted
and I got a little upset. But It was fun.
Looking for Pounamu
Then it was finally time to go down the hill to look for pounamu. My group
was the last one to go down the hill. When we got down past the hill Jerry said
that we had to go down one at a time because it was very slippery. Jerry
said not to look for green and try and find little dots of white and light blue and
green. .Go everyone! The kids ran fast to look for pounamu. 30 minutes
later I found a big piece of pounamu but after looking at it carefully I knew that
it was not Pounamu so I threw it away in the pond. Then I found a small piece
right in front of it. I ran fast to Jerry and he said, “Yes it was pounamu.”
“Yay,” I shouted. Then we walked back up the hill. It was tiring walking up the
hill.
was the last one to go down the hill. When we got down past the hill Jerry said
that we had to go down one at a time because it was very slippery. Jerry
said not to look for green and try and find little dots of white and light blue and
green. .Go everyone! The kids ran fast to look for pounamu. 30 minutes
later I found a big piece of pounamu but after looking at it carefully I knew that
it was not Pounamu so I threw it away in the pond. Then I found a small piece
right in front of it. I ran fast to Jerry and he said, “Yes it was pounamu.”
“Yay,” I shouted. Then we walked back up the hill. It was tiring walking up the
hill.
Stories of the Carvings
Now Jerry said that Room 7 and 5 can pick k two carving and he would
tell us the stories that go with the carvings. Room 5 went first To pick 2 stories
. Jerry told us why the carvings had tattoos on them in certain colours. It is
because it means what tribe they are from. The colours were green, blue,
red and black. I'm Blue which is Ngai Tahu.
tell us the stories that go with the carvings. Room 5 went first To pick 2 stories
. Jerry told us why the carvings had tattoos on them in certain colours. It is
because it means what tribe they are from. The colours were green, blue,
red and black. I'm Blue which is Ngai Tahu.
I loved staying at the marae, it was fun. I liked the night
activities
loved the food!
The end.
activities
loved the food!
The end.
By Olive.
Wednesday, 28 November 2018
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