Packing Our Bag For The Bottom Of The Ocean
By Porsha & Olive
WALT Develop our own poem in (packing my bags for...By James Norcliffe.
WALT use an increasingly description vocabulary to add interest to our writing.
WALT have some fun and creative with ideas and imagination.
A Pair of colossal transparent plastic bubbles,
razor-sharp pyramids coming off the back
to Scare Off Dangerous Carnivores,
emergency flippers attached for moving In the clear substance of water.
In case of a crisis
One immeasurable heated sweater with intricate patterns on each sleeve.
Made out of captivating mohair flocculent wool.
With the finest salmon pigment,
with a hue of amaranthine On The back of the
cozy colossal sweater.
In case we get cold
A radiant light that can help our oculus uterque see in the
obscure deep ocean. It can attract small ghotti,
for a nutritious substance and
detract all immense sea creatures.
In case we get scared
A steel 17.8 x 16.3 x 19.3 microwave that has the most
securest and safest lock,
in tones of graphite,shadow and pewter.
It has torrid plates on both sides and the bottom.
It can fry all the small ghoti that swims by.
In case we get hungry
And one baby squid.
In case we need company.
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