Friday 22 November 2019

bottom of the sea

WAIT: Develop our own poem in repose to a model ( packing my bags for the bottom of the sea  WAIT: Use an increasingly descriptive vocabulary to add interest to our writing  WAIT: have some fun and be create with ideas and imagination.



Packing Our Bag For The Bottom Of The Ocean
                            By Porsha & Olive                   

WALT Develop our own poem in  (packing my bags for...By James Norcliffe.
WALT  use an increasingly description vocabulary to add interest to our  writing.
WALT have some fun and creative with ideas and imagination.

A Pair of colossal  transparent plastic bubbles, 
razor-sharp pyramids coming off the back 
to Scare Off Dangerous Carnivores,
emergency flippers attached for moving In the clear substance of water. 

In case of a crisis

One  immeasurable heated sweater with intricate patterns on each sleeve. 
Made out of captivating mohair flocculent wool. 
With the finest salmon pigment,
with a hue of amaranthine On The back of the 
cozy colossal sweater.

In case we get cold

 A radiant light that can  help our oculus uterque see in the 
obscure deep ocean.  It can attract small ghotti, 
for a nutritious substance and
 detract all immense sea creatures.

In case we get scared

A steel 17.8 x 16.3 x 19.3 microwave that has the most
securest and safest lock, 
in tones of graphite,shadow and pewter.
It has torrid plates on both sides and the bottom. 
It can fry all the small ghoti that swims by.

In case we get hungry

And one baby squid.

In case we need company.

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